P5

Roughcut Feedback Structure (Intro/Outro/Links) - Structured well - Ends abruptly - The structure was very well put together Soundbites & Music - Music is very jolly and fits with the theme -  Really good use of soundbites and music Levels/Background Noise/Hiss/Feedback - Volume levels were clear - No background noise - intro too quiet Pace/Overall edit - the pace is consistant - the overall edit was very nicely done - A lot of stumbling  Energy/Enthusiasm - there is a lot of funny moments - a large amount of energy used - Interview was great Clear voice/Answers  - very clear and you can hear him very clearly over the music - very clear voice Action Plan   - make transitions between audio run smoother - cut out the stumbling when I'm stumbling - fade music in and out - add intro and outro music - make levels of audio the same - Add another soundbite Annotations of Audition  1. Timecode: ...